Hi Shannon! I really like your sketches and this idea. It's really unique and useful. I thought the first three steps were very clear, but the detail for in the last three steps was difficult to understand. I think it could be clearer if you use more arrows showing what the actions are, similar to how you used the arrow in step two.
Eliza Cohen
Nov 15, 2015 at 7:54pm
I like this idea its very original. The beginning and the end are very clear but I think the middle couple (3 and 4) could use a little work to help make them clearer. I also think a title would help make sure the viewer knows what this is for.
Eliza Cohen
Nov 15, 2015 at 7:54pm
I like this idea its very original. The beginning and the end are very clear but I think the middle couple (3 and 4) could use a little work to help make them clearer. I also think a title would help make sure the viewer knows what this is for.
Eli Schwemler
Nov 15, 2015 at 6:05pm
I this this sketch is well organized. When you finalize it, use color to your advantage. Make a strong contrast in color (even if the colors aren't accurate) between the hand and the headphones so it's easy to disguised one over the other. As a person who always carries around headphones, I think this sketch will help me in the near future.
Joanna Cotter
Nov 15, 2015 at 1:34pm
Hey, Shannon! I love your sketches and think your steps to "untangle headphones" are very creative. I also like how you showed messy, tangled headphones with an "X" because it made it clear (without using words) what your process is. Like Lily and Ben said, I would try and use colors to make it even more clear. You could also show the direction you want to tie your headphones in. :)
Ben Sandberg
Nov 14, 2015 at 11:08am
Hi Shannon, I like your idea for this project. The only sketch that I saw as confusing was #4. I would try and make that one more clear. Also, I would use color really specifically for this to try and make it as clear as possible. I think it is great so far though!
Lily Tendler
Nov 13, 2015 at 1:41pm
I really like your sketches and I think you did a great job in representing the "you don't want your earbuds to be tangled" aspect! I think it's also a really creative sketch. I'd say that in terms of the final product, try to use colors as things can be confusing with just the black and white. Also, if possible, try to use arrows to show which way to wrap and tie and such, as that could be a clarifying step. Really great job!
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